Saw this one from gitoku, guess he made the lines! Well, your coloring looks good, but some parts of it are flat, and the other crit, is that you are using a very very strong light coming out of his hand, but you didn't paint any of that light in his body, and so, it makes it look less important. Hope you don't mind, i made a quick paint over, to get it clear: [link]
Well, your coloring looks good, but some parts of it are flat, and the other crit, is that you are using a very very strong light coming out of his hand, but you didn't paint any of that light in his body, and so, it makes it look less important.
Hope you don't mind, i made a quick paint over, to get it clear: [link]
Keep it up!